Comments for Straight Lines

Comment on Queen Bee-witched by Ashwin

Ashwin — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 06:49:10 +0000

touching! u have brought quite a lot of facets of India and womanhood in India. surprised at choice of name though!

Comment on Black & White by Ashwin

Ashwin — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 06:43:57 +0000

hey really nice post. wud have been awesome if u stopped with -the lights turned red and they walked towards each other, leaving the reader to guess the rest! would have loved it end-less, if u know what i mean!

Comment on The Thumb Rules by Ashwin

Ashwin — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 06:37:01 +0000

nice read!

Comment on The Annual Day Function by whydoyoumoderateyourcomments?

whydoyoumoderateyourcomments? — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 19:57:02 +0000

-speechless-

Comment on Dead End by whyismynamerequired?

whyismynamerequired? — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 19:36:38 +0000

Nice one!

P.S- Re-reading all your posts today. too much joblessness.

Comment on The Thumb Rules by abhishek

abhishek — Thu, 22 Oct 2009 05:05:07 +0000

good build up…….scene description is kool …u can visualize the environment…bt i was expecting something more serious….

Comment on The Thumb Rules by pratyu

pratyu — Wed, 21 Oct 2009 17:04:12 +0000

I was expecting a more interesting ending, although this was good too… More importantly, I’m glad you’re writing again; after a long break!
Keep writing regularly!

Comment on The Thumb Rules by Manasa

Manasa — Wed, 21 Oct 2009 16:40:44 +0000

That was a awesome ending liked it a lot…..felt like the ‘typical naren’ type comment

Comment on Black & White by Aniket

Aniket — Fri, 28 Aug 2009 16:02:04 +0000

Got so involved with the writing that didn’t like the events of the story. But then, the fundamental rule of making worst things happen to the favourite characters…

Loved the story!

Comment on Black & White by Sangeetha

Sangeetha — Thu, 27 Aug 2009 13:51:52 +0000

Stumbled upon ur blog and really liked this post of urs!

Looking fwd to reading more…